For your first time working with this character you've shown an exceptional skill with your own take and personal approaches to the design. Overall, it's good and you've express a much stronger understanding in the anatomy of human based characters with there being much more animation in the structure of her legs, arms and torso bending, twisting and curving in all manners of ways that have work very well. Though the head feels a little weak in its appearance and while good it just doesn't hit the mark that the rest does.
Colour is certainly the strong point and the way you've merged various hues together and the simply use of shading/highlighting have been worked and approached beautifully.
Nice one. I remember her. You drew her quite well. I like ya new skin shade, but it looks like you shaded it without having it follow her angles in some areas. So it seems flat when ya look at it. Luv the colors and pose. Cute. ^^
Lo mismo digo, ojala hagas mas xD y en general, mas q solo dibujos Sonic Se te da genial los humanos Fer, segui asi! Dibujando lo que quieras sin importar lo que tus watchers demanden (excepto si son comisiones o ATs, obviamente xDDD) haha!